Here is a high-scoring essay with top-level vocabulary, phrases, connecting words and flawless use of language. Note how the ideas flow smoothly from one to another without obvious use of keywords....

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Some argue that the original meaning of festivals is no longer remembered, and for most of us they are just opportunities to have fun. While enjoyment seems to be the priority during festival times, i...

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Writing clearly is an art. This post aims to decode the secret behind that clarity....

Collocations are an important tool and a testing area. In more advanced exams like the GRE, collocations can in fact be key to getting an answer right....

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